【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  Y4 C. g9 I$ Y1 tWe meet and talk everyday,
/ ]7 v$ B4 L9 j6 a6 wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 n: e0 V0 [3 Q+ W6 rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( i# {- U: c+ Q# f. tWhy is it so difficult to express?
  |* ^, \: U- X* b7 oI want to confess that I love you,
( W. l; S" S' L$ e7 F# @& N9 WBut I never did
' a3 T& D: ^6 g# b+ Q+ Y' b( UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& F" Y; G3 U; A4 k( u* kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& ?% f  @, I$ R5 O) |* R0 pEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ ?7 [8 x' j/ KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- L! E2 i7 N: ]6 SIf today isn’t too late,
% ]: f' h2 Y1 v7 b9 m# P, S+ k3 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! s' |" n! x# a* O9 c2 d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( R" ^3 Q2 s; J5 R& ^; b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. M! x' A% ~$ L; l1 s' s9 I' d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 I/ _- [' S" J0 O. u<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 k5 O* i8 z5 ], y% B5 _<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 q$ I4 @+ v) h" ^; ]4 h" }1 ]<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 i' ]4 C/ a8 k9 i" @$ M+ |$ e2 T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 u1 u) ]+ m+ l( x) j6 |# S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- l1 W* Z  K" f% J( ?8 h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) R5 ~- y+ |: T) X- k8 U$ ~* F& A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( E( o% O, g! b7 v/ |& V( C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 r$ _) p& C' m) @5 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) [3 Y, k* r5 D  S  O% E& a5 J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 \7 w6 D1 a5 q# x2 O- i3 B! g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% c% f. h: h; x& n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; N3 Q8 }$ M, \% k4 k. x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 |9 A: o$ L4 o, ?2 `  C& I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  d6 W+ c' C# @0 l  P4 j6 w8 p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  i* Y0 {1 d& P. d4 n' X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: W, H  d6 v2 s" U: Z. S( a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, _, L8 ]7 \& E, i8 c- a/ I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: U8 s7 f/ n- r. y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ M' L& r1 z: p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 S( R* }! O2 c8 M$ D" z# c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 ^7 ]8 R2 M# E, u: L% j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) S, z8 C# h3 X0 Y  `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 h) |  x0 P+ ^3 N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  f9 l. s! \+ m- @8 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 h9 T/ q7 @4 t) v3 k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 X$ j9 L% H% X& x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>