【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 d- w! W" A9 `4 K1 r1 E$ {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- R  l0 E9 T/ s' f; E' D7 T0 J7 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 a0 h% c4 t$ F3 e5 a( ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 l9 g$ L8 c. W2 v8 w5 f8 W& n4 pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( I# e% u, R8 G( K0 ~3 s1 a1 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
% W% B( b$ Z# @: Y6 w* m) qWith the moon kissing it every night
" [/ R( I6 u( H8 s1 bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 P  I8 z3 n* d/ R; EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 [: A0 X+ s7 s8 y2 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, r" }$ D6 a) i9 A( HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. `$ q9 }2 x  s8 Q8 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 f1 N: I9 G! j+ n7 N0 _" hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( m! ^0 f  `3 i6 s2 {3 r1 [8 E& QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- ~' x5 I: o6 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) l6 H0 ]/ Z9 g9 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 R6 K& S% Y9 A! g1 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) D) f" H+ B2 O/ U3 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( {6 [3 {3 P8 Q0 j% H. m2 Z6 O: I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 p: k4 b1 N- I* D& N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 Y/ z4 _$ A! w% I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 @1 f% ~$ q) _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 C; N& N  W  r; |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% M4 V5 V8 e2 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) t  t1 w: i5 ^2 z$ Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 [; o0 ]) J/ E4 z9 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 f  |" |6 B( Z/ j: X* m  k( i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 C1 D) V" n2 c1 Z! v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 K! r' q! t: x' B/ G, F! V8 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" C0 [, @* f* Z) T: c; [( m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ \1 e8 P4 E) W" R7 c0 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. P0 l/ _  J/ Y/ y! ?1 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. ]6 `  O$ v) K5 Z, ^, S" A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( C! k) e, {9 Y9 S  M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 v7 D) |! ~  J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! l  j; w6 ?! P5 Z; A9 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ e" j2 q" O+ ^% ?- z6 B7 ~& k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 A$ A) b+ z- b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% x+ q( x7 [$ m( x  @0 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: X9 @, ], G, G& U: ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 s$ h4 ~9 M4 R; y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; d, u) ?. H, A. h5 B0 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( W$ g- y) i( l7 b; z2 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# B. K5 o9 p1 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 ^0 |, a. w4 h) o7 Y/ H1 I  y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 b2 r$ S) t" R2 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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+ y$ O5 k. s5 z, L" e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>