【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- o% b( C1 N9 G4 Q6 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' s( n6 P0 B& a8 l, GFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ t2 b" u5 p! o$ P/ _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 W5 l# q0 m* V0 V7 LWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 U+ J2 R* u8 t  ]) t  I0 lI want to confess that I love you,
2 d$ s7 l$ `7 JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( \  H& n$ y* qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* l! y6 P& z5 L8 pCan I entrust it to you?
6 N5 @) _( Y! zEntrust my love within your heart
8 K& w9 |: G9 e) _1 E6 fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* c. }+ s0 a, G1 w! qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 v: P1 {# v% t+ ?3 f8 }& c% D' lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 [/ q& T5 a( R3 ?9 C! S" HIf today isn’t too late,
! B' C2 J$ {# iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 a3 D! f/ F, }8 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 R4 o! ~1 Q2 h9 o& D7 H. UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 B* G4 S" m3 {3 m& C$ Q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ k$ J; z; d4 N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' L+ U- [4 s) Q+ _- g% P$ _$ a" K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% X9 a) d) s% S, _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ R' V2 A, O! ~# K! K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ O1 \' V+ h1 E! x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) Y3 E9 C  J. a/ }$ ?<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 _" y1 K8 f# j" l4 S9 j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 N+ {- Q  T0 |0 S( v, |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) I2 X" _' M0 p- |1 Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: y  A+ ?$ H, t1 }; T9 Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( T5 {9 G  D# ]/ J' ~, X! D- y* M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 s+ c  c+ ?* L3 S. {, m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ F; T" t# D9 _( {% X3 o! |" R! e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 ]9 a, J2 C1 o" x5 S" N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 b6 g% d( G# {# R' \<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% H. O' T  n- {3 y! C* s5 M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 x' C# q% N  U- h6 s* S- _8 {( m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 ?2 {; C# e. i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 A3 |! S8 k. _* m+ g. Z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: b9 ?3 C/ T$ D1 E* G5 c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) A! s/ I6 z; f; |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  x  T) Y# x0 x* m" N  g/ g, F3 r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>